2015년 11월 26일 목요일

Final) Opinion Paragraph

CCTV: Protector in A Children Care Center

Subject; A Children Care Center should install CCTV in their facility.




In my opinion, a Children Care Center should install CCTV in their facility. Recently, installation obligation of CCTV is issued globally as well as Korea. In Song-do, Korea, a teacher of the Children Care Center hit a child strongly, so it had a great ripple effect. There are several reasons why facilities have to install CCTV. First, children have a limitation of expression. According to Sun-Spring Center, a psychology development center in Seoul, 3 or 4 years old children can say just 1000 of word. They cannot make a statement objectively and specifically. Second, CCTV can prevent arguments between parents and teachers. This accident made parents doubt teachers. If a facility do not install CCTV, parents consistently doubt teachers. It is important to make sure of objective evidence. Third, it is not invasion of privacy. The opposite insists CCTV violates teacher's the right to control personal information. However, we can see easily CCTV anywhere because it acts for people's safety and prevents crimes.
In shortly, installation of CCTV is unavoidable for children's safety.

References
1) Jung, M. (2015, January 22). CCTV to be required at all daycare centers.The Korea Times.
2) Language Treatment. (n.d.). Retrieved fromhttp://www.sun-spring.co.kr/
3) Keller, S. (2012). Securing the Corporate Child Care Facility. SRK.

2015년 11월 13일 금요일

Blog Post #5

Production and Ownership knowledge


  I used to write English essay in a note or paper at last semester, so it has been forgotten easily in my hand or head. I can't find and remember my essay. However, in this semester, I wrote my essay in my blog. It is awesome. I can read my last posting wherever, and I can revise grammar or paragraph whenever for perfect word. Also, I can take feedback from other students by commenting. The Blog posting is a very good procedure for producing knowledge because it makes me to try writing perfectly. 
 Also, this paragraph is mine. I own my last postings, and I have to take responsibility for my postings. In addition, if I want to use any outsources, I have to express that for references. In briefly, I know that any paragraphs or sentences are belong to some people or institutes, so I will attention using a outsources.